Tuesday, April 3, 2012

How could it possibly be worse?

Ok! Soooo I hope I am gonna get good feedback on my story! My twitter recently got hacked n I am trying to fix it so if y'all want to y'all can post the link to my story on your TL. I hope you enjoy this! I won't post again until I have 10 comments on both posts! Love y'all :) Xoxo Christine.

"YOU WILL NEVER TELL ME NO ONIKA!" He shouted.

He grabbed her by her throat and said "You will never disrespect me again"

She couldn't believe this. She was ass naked trying to take a shower and her DAD was in the bathroom.

"I'll be back don't you dare move." He said sternly.

She was so scared. She didn't know why he would come back. She heard him pop open a beer. She stood looking in the mirror at the handprint on her neck. How will I cover this she thought. Just then her dad came back in and sat on her bed. Nicki wrapped the towel around her and walked out of the bathroom seeing her dad.

"Take the towel off Onika."

"Dad are you joking?"

"Does it look like I am joking? Drop the towel."

Tears rolled down her face as she thought of what was about to happen. He had never done this. He had beat her, cursed her out, spit on her, everything.. But he never... Touched her. She slowly unwrapped the towel and let it drop to the floor.

"Come closer." he pleaded.

She walked toward him. She was shaking uncontrollably.

"Don't shake Onika, why are you scared baby?"

"Because you're my freakin dad. This is horrible and discusting." she said in almost a whisper.

"No don't think of it that way baby, just go with it."

She was now panicking because she could see the bulge through his dress pants. As soon as she saw it he got up and shut the door.

"You can't be loud or scream or I will have to put something over your face." he said.

He walked up behind her n sniffed her hair. He started fondling her breast. She could feel him rock hard on her back. She wanted to scream so bad. She wanted Safaree to just show up and rescue her. She got pulled out of her thoughts when her dad turner her facing him and unzipped his pants.

"You going to show your daddy a good time Onika?"

"Dad please" was all she could say.

"Touch it" She grabbed it and just held it. He slapped her in her face.

"So you fuck that dumb clown Safaree everyday but you act like you don't know what you're doing?" "STROKE it" he yelled.

She did as she was told and then he said "Put your mouth on it"

"Dad No absolutely not"

"What the fuck did you say?"

"She opened her mouth to speak but he shoved his manhood in her mouth.

"Oh yes baby. Oh my god Onika"

She was horrified. She was discusted. She could throw up any second. This went on for like 10 minutes until he came. When he was done he said nothing. Just grabbed his beer and left. Nicki jumped up and ran to the sink to spur it out and brush her teeth. She looked in the mirror and started sobbing. She couldn't take this anymore. She wanted to die. She went back in her room and pulled out her notebook. She wrote at the top "This is the autobiography of Nicki Maraj" As soon as she wrote it her phone rang. It was Lauren. Nicki sighed as she answered the phone. She was about to tell her best friend about what just happened.

 "Hello?"

 "Hey Nicki what are you doing? I know it's late but for some reason I felt like something was wrong"

"Lauren I love you so much. I have something to tell you."

*WOAH!!! What do you think? Is this too deep for y'all? What do you think will happen next? What about SB? REMEMBER 10 comments on BOTH chapters!!!*

17 comments:

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  2. Not to deep. I really need to know what's going to happen with her tho so you have to keep writing! Her father is an asshole and should be....just know I hold no goodwill toward him! She needs to tell Safaree what she's going thru! Post soon....Christine! I like your name! :)

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  3. hi Christine.... not too deep at all cant wait for the next chapter she should really tell sb whats going on.. i think she leave that should be the last straw... well it would have been for me... and i hope she tells her mom too...

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  4. Omgosh my baby no....I need for her to get outta there :'(..your story has caught my attention

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  5. HELL NO I'M TOO NOSY. THIS IS NOT TOO DEEP. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT OMG

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  6. Post to the TL n get more readers!!! 10 comments you guys!

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  7. No it's not too deep! I really want her to tell Safaree! My poor Onika! I was on the verge of tears! Like her father is just sick! Like no words..But please keep writing, I really wanna know what happens next! xoxo

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  8. She needs to move in with Safaree so it can be ONIKAFAREE! Good Chap.

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  9. Wow!!! Good halter I gotta know what happens next!! Post soon

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  10. Wow this is really good its not to deep, her dad is sick ughhhhhhhh ._. , I think she should just tell safaree and get out of there asap. Post soon:)

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  11. No! Not too deep! Keep writing! This is reallly good and I want to know more!!! Her dad is absolutely wrong for what he's doing and she needs to tell someone!

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  12. :O Not too deep ! This is real good ! Butttt oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! NAA. Ima need her to move in with Safaree ASAP.

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  13. no, not too deep, definately dont stop writing! I cant believe her dads such a twat. i just want her to tell Safaree, move in with him and he can keep her safe.

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  14. Not to deep but imma need Safaree to beat the shit out of her father tbh. PLEASE POST!!!!

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  15. OMG I'M GONNA NEED A NEW CHAPTER LIKE NOW!!! Your doing great, keep it up xoxo

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  16. wow this is very different and insane, cant believe her FATHER does those things to her, i think she seriously needs to move with SB

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  17. Noooooooo, My Babyyy!! She Gotta Goooo!!! =( - @XoMyOnika

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